I love this game! Two suggestions: 1. Google Translate doesn't understand pronouns, so it mixes up his/hers, he/she, it/she, and so on. You have a male narrator and everyone else is female. Just go through and change every 'he', 'him', 'his', and 'its' to 'she', 'her', or 'hers'.
The rest of the English is not bad at all, nothing to worry about there.
2. Most of us want to image ourselves as the man. That is hard to do with this other guy's image on almost every panel. He is a very handsome guy, but I suggest removing him. We want to see the girls, not some guy. (Or you could have him as an option, female players would probably like to see him.)
But again, I love this game! Especially fixing the pronouns should be easy for you and should let us players immerse ourselves more into the game.
Fantatstic story!!!! My favorite FMG novel of all time. I thought Bayshore Academy was akso excellent but your CG AI renders were awesome! Can't wait to see your next VN. Would love to see you add CG animation between the ladies and the MC on your next VN. Best of luck in the future!!!!!!
Having tagged it with "female protagonist" is missleading, as the protagonist is a male named Marco. Was disappointed to have to play as a guy, as I searched for FMG with option for female protagonist.
Congrats on your visual novel! It was really enjoyable and you can be proud that you completed your project. Hope that you can have more of these in the future and that the process of coming up with the story + images didn't discourage you from starting a new novel.
i was about to delete the game right after watching it was in italian (since i don't understand it) but then i noticed it is only the menu and the actual game is in english
Amazing game, incredible story amazing images. I can not wait for the nest update, make her huge!!!!!!!!!. Also for Marco's sexual fantasy, you should make Luisa's dominate him and make him worship her muscles. You should also implement a height growth for Luisa. The game is fucking incredible for your first novel. If you can pls make a Mac version of the game.
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When is the next update
ok, I published the second story
where did you post it?
https://rattapumba.itch.io/the-experiment
Hi everyone, in a few days I will publish my second story, I hope you will like it
Great! We're waiting!
Yes!!
Hi, rattapumba! Thanks for your previous game! It is really unusual in a good mean) How is progress going on the new one? Looking forward to play it.
we waaaait
when?
Plz add this game android version download
I love this game! Two suggestions:
1. Google Translate doesn't understand pronouns, so it mixes up his/hers, he/she, it/she, and so on. You have a male narrator and everyone else is female. Just go through and change every 'he', 'him', 'his', and 'its' to 'she', 'her', or 'hers'.
The rest of the English is not bad at all, nothing to worry about there.
2. Most of us want to image ourselves as the man. That is hard to do with this other guy's image on almost every panel. He is a very handsome guy, but I suggest removing him. We want to see the girls, not some guy.
(Or you could have him as an option, female players would probably like to see him.)
But again, I love this game! Especially fixing the pronouns should be easy for you and should let us players immerse ourselves more into the game.
Great work so far!
Finished last night. This was REALLY good.
Fantatstic story!!!! My favorite FMG novel of all time. I thought Bayshore Academy was akso excellent but your CG AI renders were awesome! Can't wait to see your next VN. Would love to see you add CG animation between the ladies and the MC on your next VN. Best of luck in the future!!!!!!
Having tagged it with "female protagonist" is missleading, as the protagonist is a male named Marco. Was disappointed to have to play as a guy, as I searched for FMG with option for female protagonist.
Congrats on your visual novel! It was really enjoyable and you can be proud that you completed your project. Hope that you can have more of these in the future and that the process of coming up with the story + images didn't discourage you from starting a new novel.
thank you !!!
Great story, great job, thank you. I hope to see more projects of your authorship in the future!
thank you !
Thank you for your story. Hope to see your next project. You doing good.
thank you very much
do you plan on maki by a version that works for MAC users?
love it, cant wait how they´ll look in the next update!
Wonderful! I think a breast extension fetish would look good here, too.
Really great update and looking forward to whats coming next!
thanks for the update, awesome work as always!
i would love to know who the sisters are based on ? I know who Jessica is . But not Sarah or Luisa .
when is the nextupdate?
awesome story, really looking forward for the next update! hope for some more strength shows!
i was about to delete the game right after watching it was in italian (since i don't understand it) but then i noticed it is only the menu and the actual game is in english
the art is nice and is a good story, keep it up
when is the next update?
Love this game
is it just me, or is there an error by starting the game?
I did a check. It's all OK .
After several downloads, it seems to be running now. Thank you anyway and keep up the great work.
Please make the new update man. I've been checking every day.
a screenshot of the game
version 1.3
I updated several photos and continued the story
Amazing game, incredible story amazing images. I can not wait for the nest update, make her huge!!!!!!!!!. Also for Marco's sexual fantasy, you should make Luisa's dominate him and make him worship her muscles. You should also implement a height growth for Luisa. The game is fucking incredible for your first novel. If you can pls make a Mac version of the game.
She looks like Monica Bellucci ;)
Please add English or Russian version
Could you make a andriod version if possible
i love the idea of including videos
where are they from?
thank you . here and there on the internet ... I don't use a particular site
Insanely fun game! A very interesting plot. Please keep making this game! I want a sequel!
thank you!!!! I will continue the story in the coming days